Wednesday, May 12, 2010

A nosey man easedrops on his co workers and regrets what he hears

As Peter the pesty worker was slowly creeping towards the door of his frazzeled co workers office he starts to hear yelling coming from the bright room down the dark hall. So instead he started to creep down the dark hall ..... But then as soon as he started to listen he regets what he has done .He never knew that when ease dropping you could hear bad stuff about them self. All he hears coming from that room is "that Peter has a nose like a cat and a ear like an elephant. At that moment Pesty Peter relized that he should never easedrop again because sometimes you won't like what you here . So from that day on he never easedropped again. He then got annoying nose surgery and also ear reduction surgery. He also went to his huge boss to tell him that he has to fire the other two co workers because they hate him to much. But the bubbly boss said that was not possible and ended up firing pesty Peter because he was to much of a snitchy little tatle tale considering he was a old 40 year old man.

3 comments:

  1. i like it ust watch some of your spelling but otherwise i love it!

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  2. it was good but it was a little short

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  3. It was too short. It was not flowing, either, and there were many spelling errors. you should consider editing this. It has good potental. The ending was a bit rough, but the story itself wasn't too bad.

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